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Post by hazel :D on Mar 30, 2009 15:06:59 GMT -5
name... Lionstar
gender... Tom
age... 29 moons
group... ShadowClan
rank... Leader
reference... A cynical tom with green eyes and ginger-gray fur
appearance... After much though, Graywhisker, Lionstar’s mother, eventually decided on naming her kit Lionkit, thinking that his tawny, ginger-gray fur was rather like the fur of a mountain lion. Lionstar’s eyes are also sort of a tawny color, matching the ginger fur on the leader’s forehead. Unfortunately, Lionstar is neither unusually large nor unusually small – he’s knows he’s really about average height and build, but like to think of himself as larger than normal.
personality... Lionstar accepts stereotypes. He goes along with them, thinking that WindClan is courageous and bold and ThunderClan is rude and conceited. He hates the sterotype that belongs to his own Clan, and strives to make his cats noticeable and respected. Cynical and doubtful, Lionstar makes a policy not to trust anyone, even his most senior warriors. He loves a good debate – preferably one with logical but persuasive arguments – and often starts arguments without a reason. Also, Lionstar is inclined to be sarcastic and often taunts other cats. Lionstar is willing to lie to get what he wants – but only to other Clans. He believes ShadowClan is the highest of the high, and the rival Clans are weak and dumb. However, he always tried to be honest with his own Clan and makes a point of never lying to them. He tries to be a diplomatic, democratic leader and strives to be fair.
history... Lionstar was born the two most senior warriors of ShadowClan: Graywhisker, a self-called “careless but good hunter and fighter,” and Leopardstep, a cat who completely went against the ShadowClan sterotype (at least in his opinion). Lionkit was one of the two kits in the couple’s first litter. His siblings were Mosskit and Whitekit, two prissy and stuck-up she-cats. It seemed to Lionkit that his kithood flew by in a rush, and soon he became an apprentice. Soon after Lionkit became Lionpaw, his mentor, a boastful black tom named Darkfrost, died (a badger encountered and fought him on the way back from an outing into the marsh – he managed to get back to camp to warn his Clanmates, then died from blood loss). Unfortunately, Darkfrost was the deputy, and so the leader was forced to choose a new second-in-command. Lionpaw was quite happy when the leader chose Leopardstep to be the deputy. Imagine, his father the deputy! A warrior named Honeycloud became his mentor. Once again, time flew by and it was not long before Lionpaw became a warrior. The leader gave him the name of Lionfur, and his siblings became Mosstail and Whiteflower. Fortunately, Leopardstep had big plans for Lionfur: he wanted his son to be deputy, and then one day the leader of ShadowClan. Knowing that the leader was on his last life, Leopardstep was quick to suggest Lionfur as a mentor for Thornkit so he could be deputy when the time came. Thornpaw’s apprenticeship was uneventful, and he soon became a warrior (he was given the name of Thorntooth). Unfortunately, Leopardstep died during an outbreak of greencough. Ravenstar, however, agreed with him that Lionfur would be a good deputy (and later, leader) and appointed him deputy. Soon afterwards, Ravenstar died, and Lionfur became leader. Proud with his new name and title, Lionstar resolved to be a good leader.
acquaintances... Graywhisker – mother Leopardstep – father Mosstail – sister Whiteflower – sister Darkfrost – first mentor Honeycloud – second mentor Thorntooth - apprentice
notes... Click for a picture.
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Post by Darkiez =D on Mar 30, 2009 16:51:00 GMT -5
Only a few things. :3 APPEARANCE ISSUESGraywhisker, Lionstar’s mother, considered various names when naming her kit. – More like history…a shortened version would be best for the appearance section. PERSONALITY ISSUESWindClan is always meek & ThunderClan is just as soft as the kittypet down the road & ShadowClan cats are bloodthirsty and battle-wise – Click for OLM’s stereotypes. Because the books didn’t happen, there aren’t the books’ stereotypes. Lionstar is not willing to lie to get what he wants – but only to other Clans – I think you mean that he is willing to lie… HISTORY ISSUESA cat who perfectly fit the ShadowClan stereotype – See personality issue 2. ACQUAINTANCES ISSUESLeopardstar – father – You mean Leopardstep, yes?
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Post by hazel :D on Mar 30, 2009 17:00:57 GMT -5
All fixed! Sorry about the stereotype thing; I should have remembered that thread. =/
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Post by Darkiez =D on Mar 30, 2009 18:35:24 GMT -5
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