eaglestar of starclan...

[hazel :D]

name... Eaglestar

gender... She-cat

age... 60 moons at death

group... StarClan

rank... Leader

reference... A broad-shouldered dark brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes

appearance... Eaglestar's fur is brown. Darker, nearly black stripes, mark her pelt, giving her the tabby pattern. A block of white covers her chest, and her two front paws are also white. Eaglestar's eyes are a dark honey-colored amber. Even considering her broad shoulders and big bones, Eaglestar does not consider herself fat. Most of her weight is muscle, and so the former leader is very offended whenever she is called fat or even slightly overweight.

personality... Eaglestar is disparaging and sarcastic, with a tendency to state the obvious. She enjoys a good laugh and will often tell jokes of her own, but they are nearly always on someone else’s behalf. Even though her sharp claws and strong limbs can make her seem as if she’s violent and scary, Eaglestar prefers to listen and learn rather than fight now and regret later. She has an intellectual side, and as a living cat, constantly watched out for new techniques and battle plans for her Clan.

history... Eaglestar’s mother, Vineheart, died while giving birth to her only two kits. The two kits, then known as Eaglekit and Darkkit, were raised by the leader’s mate, who was the only queen at the time. Eaglekit was mentored by Silverstar, who thought of her and her brother as his children. After Eaglepaw and Darkpaw received their warrior names -- Eagletalon and Darkheart -- they soon got their first apprentices. Eagletalon’s first apprentice was a small tabby she-cat named Moorpaw. Her apprenticeship was long but uneventful, and not too long after Moorpaw became Moorwhisker, Silverstar died. His deputy, Fallingleaf, became leader and appointed Paintedfur deputy. Soon, though, Paintedfur died and Fallingstar chose Eagletalon as deputy. 20 or so moons later, Fallingstar died. Eagletalon became Eaglestar. Several moons after that, Eaglestar was attacked by Thorn and her rogues. She put up a fight but they managed to kill her, and Eaglestar is now in StarClan.

acquaintances...
VINEHEART - mother
FROSTPELT - father
HONEYTAIL - foster mother
DARKHEART - brother
SILVERSTAR - mentor
MOORWHISKER - apprentice


notes... Plot char, yay. Click for pic.

[Darkiez =D]

Eaglestar’s fur is dark, a brown so dark it’s nearly black. Thin, lighter stripes mark her pelt, giving her the tabby pattern.

I have trouble picturing that...un-Photoshopped picture please?

Eaglestar’s eyes are also quite dark – she thinks they are a sort of honey-colored amber.

The "she thinks" isn't exactly wrong so much as peculiar in context -- it suggests she's delusional, and they're actually bright purple or something. Also: you say they're also quite dark, but then that they are honey-colored...do you mean they're a darker version of honey-colored amber, or did you just forget about the dark-eyes bit you put in there?

leaded = leader

seem like she’s violent and scary = seem as if she's violent and scary

-- Eagleclaw and Darkheart --

Eaglestar's warrior name was Eagletalon.

His deputy, Leafstar, appointed Eagleclaw. 20 or so moons later, Leafstar died. Eagleclaw became Eaglestar.

Silverstar's deputy would have had to been Fallingleaf/star, who appointed Paintedfur deputy before Eagletalon.

[hazel :D]

All fixed. I changed her appearance a lot and included a picture.

[Darkiez =D]

...okay, so the image doesn't show up. 'cepted. will move it later.